Shadow of Greatness

it all ends with Sic Semper Tyrannis.. . I think that you should change this line or simplify it a bit. I didn't know what 'Sic Semper Tyrannis' meant so ...

I have to apologize. I didn't realize your hate of Dr.Seuss. It seems to me that the only critique you have is that I should write this how you would ...

This poem isn't meant to be that dark. I wanted it to to show what a soldier goes through and the reasons that they endure what they do.

I fight for what I think is right. I am a warrior trained to fight on land, air, sea, day and night. America is the dream for all who welcome ...

Hey there. The concept for this is pretty nice, but the fact that it's based off of something unoriginal is going to make it all seem phony and trying to ...

Ah ok, thx. I was wondering what forum this would go in. Didnt know it was a category for this sort of thing. The Yws folk think of everything don't ...

(Well, another user and I got it into our heads to make a story together. In it, we would alternate scenes, not knowing what the other is going to post ...

I simply adore this poem. I love the rhyme as it flows through my mind. My favorite lines are "And I know, for none but time I'd be lost in ...